Hello, Mayshing here, co-host of FeedBackQuest, your game caught my attention with the pretty illustrative quality (being an artist myself, I appreciate those efforts) I archived my playthru. The work is quite polished, it's kind of getting up-there to compete with the AA titles, then it's going to require you to make your art as polished as they are and remove some of the sketchier quality stuff. I would say that would be a good consideration. The game play, game flow is excellent and really enjoyable. All the hints, reminders are easily accessible which is really appreciated.
Honestly not much to nit-pick on this game, it's solid as it is, I would say get the demo to give alittle more would really hook people, half an hour is decent but felt like I only did half an hour of tutorial. lol WELL done tutorial stages nevertheless! I also spent half an hour trying to determine what kind of pairings we are having in the story. Successful characters. lol