I have to say, this VN has an excellent soundtrack~ ;D
Fantastic work on the art and visual presentation here! You made great use of the full 3D environment; I was especially impressed by the dynamic lighting and changes in perspective during the whole sequence on the train—the bit with the surveillance camera was a nice touch, heheheh~
I also had a ton of fun with the role-reversal between Piq and Mix, so much so that the story left me wanting more. That is, I wanted to see how the new toxic dynamic between them would unfold, and whether Piq would stick around or if her shaky resolve would falter as soon as the rubber hit the road with their arrangement~ I also would've loved to see something like Mix taking her time softening Piq up before letting her guard down, giving Piq just the slightest drip-feed to sustain her while pounding out any last resistance to ensure she stays loyal, heh heh heh.
But yes, great work on this VN~