This was a super cool concept, you have a great focus for atmosphere and did a great job immersing the reader despite the constraints. The point of view transition I found a bit sudden (potential feedback) but the concept works super well.
The classic UI works super well in this kind of storytelling, and I found the use of description very engaging as well.
Looking super forward to a more complete version if you ever make one, if anything to be sliightly less confused (or more in other enjoyable ways :P)
Ps. Hope you recover soon!