Nicely composed, has a core structure and theme. However I was prepared for the melody to take an epic turn at 0:13, but it didn't quite go for that.
That's a great point! I was trying to give it a bit more oomph at that part, but I probably could have done more with the melody there.
It's probably due to the effect of trying to keep songs to the 20-second limitation. Anyhow, there's really nice stuff going on in this track like the guitar, bass, right side bells etc. Nice work.
