Am I really going to follow this tall, pushy goth woman I just met (who has peculiarly sharp teeth) back to her place alone? Of course I am~!
I want to open up MC-chan's head to find out what makes her tick. Specifically, while I can appreciate at a high level someone wanting to be kept as a pet by a vampiric goth dommy mommy, I found myself wondering what made MC-chan in particular so desperate for it. After all, it must take more than a single lousy het relationship to make a girl want to relinquish all of her autonomy to effectively a stranger, no?
There's the blood sickness that gets mentioned, sure, but I feel like there's more going on under the surface that leaves MC-chan in particular (and the other people who fall victim to it, for how rare it's said to be) susceptible to it, you know what I mean? Has she been hopelessly overwhelmed with everything in her life for years now, and thus deep down looking to offload her burdens onto someone else? Does she have a long, troubled history of having to take care of other people / her former lovers, and wants someone else to take care of everything for her for once? Has she, in fact, been the cause of all of her bad breakups, and out of a sense of guilt for her past mistreatment of others, feels she deserves to be dehumanized and degraded? I want to put this sad little girl under a microscope to see why she is the way she is, and why she's so vulnerable to vampiric predation...
That aside, nice work on this VN~
P.S.: I named the vampire lady "Carmen" because I think she looks like a Carmen, but I'm curious if she and MC-chan have canonical names, heh.