this is a wonderful story. i love seeing how sun clumsily makes their way throught their life, lost and aimless. the feeling was well depicted and i really liked how it was depicted how behaviour like that can affect and hurt others around you.
the art is great and the story kept me quite invested. i appreciate the use of sketchy cgs, its convenient as an artist lol but also they help sell a raelly particular mood in the intimat scenes. i really look forward to seeing your future works. a vn like this is a huge accomplishment so good job for making your entry!
also runa is a cute little hellion. i love them for that