Haha, I never really put myself out there until recently, too, so I know that feeling very well.

But I really like your submission! Interesting ideas, I will definitely implement some into my home game. I hope you keep going!

Congratulations for creating this and putting yourself out here! I do hope you get to finish this one and do more works! I gotta say that I like the Knights and Myths that you've made!

I noticed you were worried since this was your first time publishing a design publicly, but you did a good job :) Congrats on getting yourself out there and challenging yourself, even if you didn't get to the Myths like you'd hoped. Just means you've got something for next time to try!

Fantastic work.
There is a lot to love here:  sparks on each page (even the intro and the blank page!), omens that are evocative and not immediately and obviously consequential to each other (in the spirit of the examples in MB, imo, and what i search the most in a myth),  no images, so they are print ready and i kinda can collage something in the spaces left blank, the poems, knights that can't wait to play as,  pondering on the possible implications of the disappearance of bells. 12/10

It includes the Seers for the Knights as well! Great flavor and excellent writing/formatting. Could easily see these alongside those in the book. A great resource for anyone who's managed to run low on new and exciting options for their players ;)