<3 I’m really glad you noticed the paper styling! I spent a ridiculous amount of time creating the scroll effect. The sound effects were making me nervous, because my editing software is, uh, old school. More attention on editing the narrative might bring out the emotional end I was going for initially.
I thought I’d smoothed out the text jumping. That’s going back on my list of isdues to research.
Thank you so much for your feedback.