Pros and cons are sown below. Check out my vid (the game is the third there):
Advantages:
1. I love the scares that you have come up with. I think they are original and effective. Well done!
2. I like that the game had a bit more complicated plot that most of indie horror games. Story telling through the environment is very cool! Though, I have a feeling that I missed something in my playthrough.
3. I like those little tasks that you had to do on your laptop. I think that was very clever. Reminded me a bit of Welcome to the game.
Disadvantages:
1. A tub filled with red liquid in the middle of the kitchen. Really? I think it is very strange not to have a separated bathroom.
2. There was no sense of danger. Even though you saw a guy walking around. He was not a threat. Maybe that would be cool if you would have to do something after seeing him.
3. I would like a bit more attention to the stuff in the closet. Maybe a comment or something. Because otherwise it's kinda funky.
Overall:
I enjoyed the game a lot. A bit more polish and that would be a very strong experience. I could see a bigger game coming out of it. Great job!
Hope my feedback was useful!