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Reposting my request so it does not get lost;

Are there any plans to flesh out the beginning of the game during the month the MC start his job to the point Anna asks the MC about the group fund collection and starting her Starmaker Profile
It would be nice to see (even if it just a montage, like the opening of the game) events which lead to this point; 
• MC catches Anna looking at Starmaker on her phone or computer
• Anna catches the MC getting changed or out of the shower
• Anna tries taking some selfies on her own
• Other examples of teases to add to continuity in the story 
This part of the story is a bit of a void at the moment. I always get funds to do the holiday event when Anna gets handsy after sunbathing cause it helps develop the story before 3 Stars. Though even with this there still is continuity issues on Anna knowing what to expect from the MC
Some more breadcrumbs to how she comes to that decision would be appreciated. The whole after sunbathing scene dialog does feels like the story has missed points along the way when you get to this scene (before it gets to 3 stars.) This could be quickly remedied with a couple of lines and additional images on the beach where she is looking at the MC's swim shorts for example.  Like I mention just little reworks to help with continuity and story telling would be greatly appreciated, not expecting anything major before the game is complete.  
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Generally agreed that some more story build up for Anna's corruption would be great! Anna trying on her own (perhaps anonymously, without her face in the photos) and failing at Starmaker would make a lot of sense in the story. Also, maybe something like Josef making fun of her/looking at her negatively for taking those sorts of pictures of herself? It would support why she doesn't want to go to Josef for this.