Just got done playing the new content with the Forces of Nature. There are some really good lines there, like the particular fourth wall break with Caitlin's main scene and the condom joke with Thundurus.
I gathered some typos and bugs from the new breeding scenes and from skimming earlier chapters, hope this helps.
Bugs:
The image of Misty presenting herself in Chapter 1 seems to be broken, likely a file name issue.
That old glitch where you can try to catch Keldeo after you've already caught her appears to be back.
Pokemon Typos:
1. In the Rampardos scene the word "her" is incomplete in "as he belly bulges up to her boobs". I think the word "this" is also unnecessary in " considering this she stood up to a Goddess for you before"
2. In Landorus' breeding scene the word "does" is misspelled in "speaks far more than she foes "
3. After Landorus' breeding scene "who's" in "you're not sure who's" should technically be whose.
4. In Tornadus' first question there was a typo in the word "but" that makes it "bu`t"
5. In Thundurus' second question Raichu is mispelled as " Riachu"
6. In Thundurus' breeding scene the word "than" is replaced with that in "way more fun that making storms too!"
7. After Thundurus' breeding scene "than" is replaced with that again in "something better to do that make storms"
8. Before Enamorus' quiz the word "they've" should be "they'd" in "they look like they've make for a fun foursome". I'm not 100% sure but I think there's also a typo in "Thinking big thick cocks, you...". Is that meant to say speaking of?
9. In Enamorus' breeding scene the word "and" should be "in" in the line"locking your lips together and a kiss"
10. In Landorus' version of the Forces downtime scene I think there's a word missing in "you straddle her other leg with your rod line up with her adorably wet love-hole". In addition, either "hands" or "strays" has an extra s in "her hands strays to her stretched stomach"
11. In Tornadus' version of the force's downtime an apostrophe turned into a semicolon in " it;s actually kind of surprising"
Human Typos:
1. In Gardenia's initial breeding scene the word "ten" is replaced with then in "Well... then to fifteen"
2. In Skyla's initial scene the word "lend" is mispelled in "the big ones I couldn't led you anyway"
3. There is a text color error in Elesa's breeding scene causing extra yellow starting after the line "And as luck would have it, the legendary Fantina just released a new line of pregnancy wear, I bet she'll design something special for me if I ask!</span>". That one probably depends on if you bred Fantina.
4. In Yancy's breeding scene the word "scheme" is mispelled in "agree to go on with her sceme", and I think the word on should be "along"