>Could you elaborate on your point about navigation?
Hmm. I'll try to. More or less I'm saying it just feels more a bit confusing in it's current state. One problem is that there's no description of the area you enter. Even something like "You stand in X, You see Y to the north, and the entrance to the Z in the east". Basically, if there's not going to be a lot to go off of visually, then text with have to fill in the blanks.