The UI and text animations were really cool and the level design was interesting. I felt that the controls and movement needed some more polish. The respawn animation is a neat touch, but made dying feel much more punishing.
And as for progressing the dialogue text, it would be nice to have the input complete the whole sentence instead of moving on to the next one since I still want to read the text. I notice that you are using the Text Animator plugin, so there's an option to do that right in the inspector! I hope this helps :>
Overall, nice work!