Yeah I'm working on fixing it.
Ah yeah, itchio has been sucking recently. I downloaded the game from your patreon though.
The art is pretty good, and I think you've done a good job story telling. With that being said, the game really needs to be optimized. Skipping or quickly moving through dialogue causes the game to freeze up. Might be because your images are such a high res.
I noticed your game is over a GB and a half, while another fmg game, Gift From the Ocean, isn't even a quarter of a GB, despite being longer and more detailed. Perhaps reach out to some other renpy devs in the space if you need help.