OK, there are a great many terrific aspects to this game, but I'm not sure I understand the point of blindsiding the player with vicious, violent murder of a character that was just introduced. I can understand that with RPG elements characters must fight and there may be deaths, but for me, the gratuitous, bloody murder of an innocent destroys the eroticism and tone of the game.
I don't like to criticize something people obviously put a lot of hard work into, but I figured I should post my feedback in case there could be other players who feel this way.