Considering this was your first game it was pretty solid and it had a touchy storyline too. Your game is the last in my video and starts at 24:16
As yourself and others already pointed out, the game does have some performance issues and bugs, but it's nothing game breaking.
I can see you have released several games since this game, and I'm certain that you've become a lot better. However, I would be happy to assist you, if you're interested.
Keep it up.