While I can certainly appreciate her rejecting all of the knights until she got to Yolande—hell, I'd be just as gay for Yolande as everyone else in that world apparently is—Frieda's really not beating the "all-around unpleasant person" allegations with that attitude of hers, heheheh~
Of course, with how everything is framed in the story, it feels like both Frieda and the whole magic-induced yuri incident is little more than a minor footnote in some larger narrative—and one that definitely had my attention~ I'd love to learn more about this dangerously beautiful witch, and her legions of spiky knights and living chitinous war machines~
Very nice work, especially for your first VN!
P.S.: I feel for poor Mr. Knight here, getting called ugly despite being in full plate with his visor down...
