good, good stuff - this is super fun use for second guess system! really like how rage mechanic turn out - longer scenes make rerolls more likely, so might reach edge of frustration again and again. which... hey, real!
one nitpick, can not really think of any good way to positively spin certain events upon successful reroll (mostly 1 and 13) :'D but ah, such is nature of one-page games - can not really perfectly elaborate.
super fun!
on reroll with a positive spin -
1. You have pinched an unpleasant spot only he is hyper-sensitive in a way that has cross-wired pain to pleasure momentarily. Also, Lord Moon is known to be a Kinky Bastard so it's up to you why he might decide he likes it this time.
13. Maybe you damaged something that was a gift from someone he hates. Or you damaged the same thing again, but he's already gotten angry at you and now he's just amused.
And there's always the option of "drag in another character" to add complications or a twist on what's happening.
