That was really cool, one of the best twists I've ever seen in a visual novel!
The art is a bit too good imo, though the end section has some parts that lean a bit towards bad.
If anything the game overall just feels more like a subversion of VNs or experimental than truly "so bad its good". But if need be probably better to trend towards good than bad, which this game does handily imo.
And I frankly appreciate the short length of the game, it has enough cool stuff going for it, doesn't need to be stretched out o half an hour.
Great work!