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## Bug Report ##
***Spoiler Alert***





Turn 143 : Heron
"Always have, always will. I will follow him anywhere," he smiles wryly, "even out of The City."

--> This is incorrect, I think. We are staying not leaving. It should say, if I remember correctly from the Original Version, something like "even to rebellion."

Whoops! Thanks for catching that. Also, I'm impressed and delighted that you remembered!

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Let's just say that I may or may not have read through the Original a few times too many LOL It's not like I know it by heart...not all of it anyway... <3

It is a good story, and the extended ending was a nice a touch, so thank you for that <3 ...though I have to admit I always pictured my MC's and Heron's bedroom roles being the other way around...

I don't usually think of my characters as having roles in the bedroom, it's more what feels appropriate for the scene at the time. So, you can definitely imagine it swapped and think of this as a one-off, lol.

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I get it, art should always comes first. Plus it is your story and they are your characters, I'm just there to enjoy the ride LOL so whatever it is that you share with us, I embrace it with open arms <3 So that you for this treat!

<< now back to waiting for Cantata chapter 4>>