Great prose! It builds a strong atmosphere for the reader. It's good you have included a variety of shadow kin types to keep them interesting. Well done!
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Thank you for the kind words; your feedback means a lot.
My main goal with the prose was to invoke the specific feeling of reading the classic Appendix N authors, so I am thrilled that the atmosphere and writing resonated with you. I am also glad you enjoyed the variety of shadow-kin; my aim was to make each one feel like a unique and unsettling threat.