It is a very soothing melody :). If I didn't see the name of the song, I would still have likely guessed it'd be a lullaby, so good job there. The connection to a "desert" is a bit more far-fetched than some of the other songs, so a small explanation in the 'Description' would have been helpful. Either way, it is a nice melody with lovely chord progression. You can't fool me by calling yourself a 'beginner', I hear that you know your way around chords and melodies, and I just know that you have a lot of potential. The bass can be a bit too loud at times, but you've got something nice here. Keep up the good work man :D
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it kinda turned into a lullaby mid-way through, so i just went with it XD i knew the connection was kinda weak, but I was trying to challenge making anything for the first time in almost two years. I'm pretty bad at seeing a lot of my work objectively, so I'm glad to hear you think I'm more than just a beginner <3 Mixing and mastering is still my Achilles Heel, and that's gonna take a loooooooooooootta time to work on (X~X) Thanks for leaving a comment, and good work on you song as well! :D