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Yup, seems fixed now.
Okay. I noticed a rather funny bug that if you hold a direction key as you open and close the menu, the player will be able to noclip through walls and the environment. Kind of hard to show off with screenshots. Might need to try it yourself to see what I mean.
The new expressions are a great addition. though I'm kinda surprised El Shark doesn't have one of those closed eyes "hmpf" ones.

Okay, I hate to do this, but I have more spelling issues I noticed

'Luckily your' should be 'Luckily you're' Could maybe add a comma at the end of 'unharmed to improve readability.





 'theres' should be "there's' This goes across every document in the game.


'tell folk' 'tell' should be 'telling'

 



'intresting.' should be 'interesting.' Also noticed a bug in Fox's journal entries where it would say '0' instead of the player's name.





'conveniuently' should be 'conveniently'




'wonder' should be 'wander'



extra 'w' on 'town'



'inflitrate' should be 'infiltrate' I'd also reword either the first part of this document or this part because Dr. Dingle kinda goes in a loop stating first 'I need to tell you about the breech situation' followed by 'the convicts managed to breach containment' I would just say something like 'The convicts have managed to escape the prison and infiltrate the surrounding area.'

 

'intrested' should be 'interested' Also the $200 doesn't get removed from the player's inventory right now. I'm also really curious what the Apartment receptionist's sprite is gonna look like, lol.
Oh, and I found another bug.


You can currently walk through this door, instead of it being interact-able.
Anyway, that's all for now!

Thanks, I'll fix up all the spelling errors and bugs. I'm starting to wish RPG maker had a spell check so I can start catching these small errors myself! 

I could give the fox and shark more face sprites, more variety would be nice. I was also going to add more poses for the MC tomorrow, probably a crossed arms and a cover up or something. And also add these poses/expressions to the sex scenes.

I was going to make the receptionist a soulless NPC (like the others ones in the town) but I actually like the idea of a landlordy character who visits your apartment from time to time to make you pay for rent or just to visit. 

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Does RPGMaker have Copy-Pasta-able text? What you might do is use a dedicated typing program to check what you write, then just copy and paste that into RPGMaker.
 

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Oh I never thought of that, I'm gonna start doing that, thanks!