First of all, the writing is excellent. Very pulpy and feels right at home in the Appendix N. Art and design are really good, love the map on the cover page; clever way to save space! The twist is nice, and the puzzles are good. I like the monsters (especially the Geometric Wraith, which I will likely steal for my Vaults of Vaarn game as it fits right in haha). Finally, I like the clock. It's nice to have it built into the adventure so that the game master can just use that tool to drive the action forward. Great job, I would run this for sure!
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Thank you for the incredibly kind feedback; it is wonderful to read!
I am thrilled you enjoyed the writing and the overall Appendix N feel. Please feel free to steal the Geometric Wraith for your Vaults of Vaarn game. I would be honoured to see it stalking amongst the shadows.
I included the clock mechanic to create a pressure pot of tension that builds directly from the players' actions within the Ossuary. I am glad you found it a useful tool for driving the action forward. Thank you again for your thoughtful comment!