Great overall game! I loved the art style and story for it, although the music felt really repetitive and with a small amount of sound effects the audio gets a bit boring.
Also, I would like if you're able to move the camera by yourself, since it was sometimes hard to see where I was going. But that's just a preference thing :)
Furtherado, I have no other improvements I'd like to see, so it's a really good game.
Well done!