Love the tone, there’s a very clear vibe to the whole thing that I think is really intriguing. Plus, using the cover as a pseudo-map is clever! Awesome job!
Thank you! I worked to establish a haunting dread throughout the crawl, so I am thrilled that it resonated with you. Using the cover as a map was a fun way to work within the page-count constraints, and I am glad you found it a clever touch.