Aaaaahhh, this is so cuuuute T_T
I really love your art, it's super pretty!!! The backgrounds are beautiful and I especially love how you drew Zavier, he's adorable!! The chibies were really cute as well.
The story is making me very intrigued; I'm curious as to why Lamb lost part of their memories and how Zavier is connected!!
I think my only critique is that the english is a bit hard to understand, at times. I think having an editor could help!
PS: Seeing easter eggs from several games made me happy (especially seeing a Fawna plushie, I'm gonna cry happy tears SDKJGBSKBJ)!!