The prose is strong. The opening sentence is an incredible atmospheric hook that immediately draws you into the adventure: “The glow of primordial markings across the walls rises and dissipates, as the carcasses of all that died inside the chasm begin to move once more, attacking anyone in sight.”
The layout is a joy to read and provides a visual treat for the GM. This submission has a great deal of personality. Well done! It is a very cohesive experience.