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it's good that you were able to design a self-consistent small world around the theme. I think if the conversation with the suspects could have been deepened through the lens of the characters, it might have added to the appeal of the therapy concept. it was fun to pick out situations and individuals, though ^_^

Thank you!!!

I very happy that you liked it! 

I know the characters could have gotten a lot deeper and more personal instead of just "information givers" if that is what you meant.

If you don't mind. would you like to share in depth what you mean?  :D

I really appreciate the feedback! 

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Sure. as a very simple example, one of the individuals might have an unusual/weird hobby. and the behaviour required by that hobby might cause us to get a signal somewhere in the centre of the case that that person is important. so unless we understand the hobby, we are misled. these things have many unpredictable consequences in their complexity.

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Oh okay, thank you! I can definitely see what you are talking about.

I really tried to get some emotions and personality to the some of the characters, by the way they spoke and their text-speed.

But I totally agree with you that my characters are a bit flat and could be improved. Thank you so much for the input!

I will think about it and try to improve in the future! <3

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Good luck! it was a pleasure talking to you <3

You too! Good luck! :D