I recognize the cheeky narration from your Shovel Jam game!
It's a bit less interactive than I usually like in these types of games, but I suppose that's the point
Normally I'd nitpick the art, but the MS Paint vibe kinda fits here
If anything, I think you could upgrade your mic setup. The narration is the central part of the game, so it's a shame that the audio is a bit muffled at times
Either that or some EQ and compression to help clean up the audio