The narrative is there to fit the idea of you choosing important paths in your life, I like it- reminding me of Alter Ego, the art and audio is okay but I feel like all of it doesn't really fit together well enough.
I feel like the loop is a bit limited as one play of this game and turning it off does not incur a loop, but it does send an invite to the player to make different choices in there life, looping over and over again, it is there but I feel ike it could be developed further.
I like the idea, you are almost there with something - good job!