Thank you for your detailed feedback! Yes the text is broken in this version. It's supposed to continue. If you want to check out the patched version over on my profile you could experience the true game. I've fixed a lot of the things you mentioned.
I think you just gave me a great idea too! I will draw a little hole in the ground and then when you go into the tree fade the cover to transparent so you can see the snake down in there. That'd be so cool! Thank you!
Also as for the sun not coming out, you have to eat more and more every night. So you may have needed to eat 3 by that night. I will add some visual indication of when you're full so that you will know when to go back to the tree.
And thank you for your compliment! Those clouds and grass are both made with the power of shaders.
Thank you so much for your time and feedback! Preciatcha!