hey i dont really know how to rank this as i havent really played these sorts of games but it's pretty interesting. In terms of art its good but i think you could add some sound effects for selecting white text or just moving on, it could just give a bit more life. Also lore wise i dont understand why the void is using teenagers to put into mechs, does not seem really that logical i think adults would make more sense. Plus there was mention that they use neural links in the mechs so i feel generally adults have a higher mental power but maybe theres some lore reason why. good game!
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hi thanks for your comment! i’ll definitely think about adding sound effects—i haven’t tried that in twine before, but i’ll see if i can make it work. as for using teenagers as pilots, that was something i planned to explain in later chapters (though i probably should’ve done it earlier). really appreciate your helpful suggestions!