good story you got hear I think it could be way more then just this. Also need a background sound just hearing the "bing, bing" sounds like there talking while being in the void of nothing. like add night time sounds since there is a picture of them laying down. or add house ambiance or the sound of crickets just something to give it more of a feel to your game. now this is only a Suggestion but the could really kick your game up level or two! trust me sound makes the game more cool to play and less empty conversations. it make the story feel like the readers really there making the decisions.