efficient and evocative writing does a great job at setting the scene and establishing a pulp vibe.
Would love to see an illustration of an Atlantean. Such a great concept.
1d4 fleeing raiders was unclear to me where they threw themselves.
Holy cow the cover and layout are outstanding.
I used your template and have recc it to others btw. Thanks!
Lord Blubub is hard to decipher in the circle under “featuring”. I had to read the module before it clicked.
These are minor nit picks but this is an absolutely fantastic short adventure In every aspect.