Really neat idea, I was a bit sad that the red markings didn't show up on my ship though :c
Text adventure vignettes stitched together by a fun lil lunar lander game is a great concept, and I hope you end up taking it further! I didn't mind the controls, but I'm not sure how well they pair with dodging the fast-moving moons - I feel like something a bit slower and more deliberate would fit the vibe more, really hone in on that classic reverse-burn mechanic and the tension that comes from trying to fight a planet's gravity to nail a gentle landing. The biggest absence I feel was the lack of feedback on collision - I didn't even notice I was taking damage until I spied the tiny hull meter at the top.