Very very funny game. The tone and humor are just perfect. Many lines of dialog got me laughing hard. The story is absurd and yet not so unrealistic in the same time. I could relate to many situations at first and lots of them then slowly escalated to Monthy Pythonesque endings.
As others said you can polish that by adding graphics (and maybe sound effects on some scenes?). Or you could add some mini-games in between? Like having the player really try to fill in specific parts of the online form in the first part of the storyline(s), or making the player burn their remaining tickets, I don't know.