I will tell you your not doing nothing wrong here your talking to someone who loves to read especially books and naughty games and manga don't let the others change the way how you write or how your story plans out Im enjoying every moment of this game I've seen many times how game developers change up there tactics because a couple of the audience didn't like something NTR.ai you are magnificent story teller every scene was splendid please never change how you write because you won us over just the way how you are