I did acknowledge elsewhere that the em dash usage was overwhelming in the first few chapters, and I did reduce it while keeping some instances in later chapters, since the punctuation serves a purpose. Apparently, you don’t understand what that purpose is, which is why you had to ask AI to write that nonsense post and manufacture a comparison between a specific formatting request and normal usage.
And honestly, you brought up several writing style issues you disliked, all of which were present from the very first few chapters. You kept reading anyway, and now you want to alt+F4 your life. Honestly, maybe you should, because you clearly don’t know when to stop, and here you are crying about it at the finish line. Or maybe those things weren’t actually dealbreakers after all, so why did they take up the bulk of your complaint? Pick a lane and try to be consistent, instead of embarrassing yourself on the internet.

