This game has a really nice art style. The "game over" text at the end was really well written and moving - did not expect it (unexpected 5 stars for narrative). It took me a couple of rounds of playing to fully understand the gameplay but once I did I got the hang of it. It is a very good and original interpretation of the theme. I know there's some pretty good tutorial text at the beginning but I think something I would recommend for these type of games is a guided "practice" round at the start to ensure the player understands the mechanics before letting them off. But also understand that it's really hard to do that within a short game jam.
Stellar work overall :)