Overall: 2- It is a damn crying shame you couldn't get this thing done in time. The sci-fi theme and deviations to the canon were killer. Next Harold Jam you enter, really try to zero in on what's preventing you from finishing those entries and work around that. What you've shown off is very unique and a finished, polished entry from you could be a highlight.
Gameplay: 2- It's a walking simulator. Simple but serviceable. Extremely minor nitpick; "Thank you" should be at the bottom of menus like the "No" option in most RPGs. Muscle memory speaking.
Music: 2- No music and RTP sounds, but honestly the lack of music kinda helps the sci-fi vibe! Almost reminds me of the future area in Live A Live.
Story: 2- Not gonna lie, the way you set it up at the beginning was really cool and had a lot of potential. It's just a shame it ended so abruptly.
Graphics: 3- My usual 2 for RTP gets bumped up by that RM Fes-style Harold sprite which blends in really well!
Comedy: 2- Not a ton to be found, but it doesn't detract from the experience as a whole.