I liked it.. The art and music was pretty. The sound effect of the creatures yelling was really annoying. And the exposition dumps were really long and annoying to sit through. Also the text was unreadable because of the pixel filter on it.
sounds like you didnt like it :P jkjk but overall yeah i agree with the issues,it all just came down to overscoping honestly since its my time gmtk jamming, anyways glad you liked the art at least!