Great art and story, my one gripe is the lack of indication for when/how to progress, I think its 'time' based? It might be more interactive to be 'event' based, so you could have a 'confirm' button at the end of emails to trigger the next event or something, this lets people read at their own pace. The UI is nicely polished too, gj!
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Hey! Thanks for the kind words and the feedback! That's very fair! Based on my two playtester sessions, this is what I settled on for the jam, because I decided I'd rather leave a bit more empty space than rush the player and make them miss something important. If I ever build something similar again or polish up this idea, I'll definitely go with a more sophisticated event scheduling.