things i liked:
the writing is good, those bandits are my favorite characters
the character designs are really good
the platforming feels and looks tight and polished
throwing the pencil is cool
critiques:
the combat feels "forced" for lack of a better term. like, you had pretty good platformer combat, that you shoved rpg elements into
other than the character designs, the art just lacks a consistent "style" feels too "liscense free art you'd find on pixabay"