First, thank you so much for checking out the game! I greatly appreciate the fact that you played, but also that you took the time to give feedback!
1. Yes, tokens would be nice. I personally do a ton of writing and paper notes so I don't have need for them, but I can see how someone playing at a table space may want them. I think, in my next update, I'll add that as a suggestion, thank you!
2. Storytelling/culture for the civilization was actually a part of the original design, but I had to cut several things out to keep the game at about 10 pages of actual rules (which was my release goal). I am hoping to add an expansion which explores the storytelling aspect of the game in the future.
3. I think I can make a separate version of the Civ Sheet with gray lines, that way folks can print the version they want!
4. This is a great idea as well, and I'm a bit disappointed with myself in not asking the artist Alex to provide this originally. I'll see if he can put something together (or if I can do it) for my next update.
Thank you again for the feedback and checking out the game! :)