Great game! The graphics look bad from the screenshots, but they are really nice and cute! Story and narrative is great! Great levels and puzzles! Conversation text animations and sound effects make it perfect! Full score!
Only things I can suggest are working on the background appearance beside the characters and main stuff (of course it seem you were surprised by time!) and making a web build also (Not sure what engine or library you use) and a background for the main menu. The game also has settings! My gosh! Great job buddy! Good luck. I think your game is gonna be one of 100 if it gets enough ratings. Rate other people's games, dm people in discord to advertise your game, don't let it be wasted!