Really like everything here, but my only thought (and maybe I just missed it) is why this is all happening? Why did Thanadale want to stop using the Storm Dragons? Why haven't any of the other wizards closed the portals? Did they try to stop him? Are the dragons hard to use/expensive? I just don't see/understand the Betrayal that starts us off. Otherwise, concept, story, layout, map; all absolute fire. Just some unanswered questions.
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It's just a case that I couldn't explain as much as I wanted to within the limits of the format. I bit off a little too much for the scale of the project. It's not very satisfying but I suppose the answer is that the GM can make up whatever they deem is the right answer to those questions. I feel it's bad form for me to explain my reasoning outside of the product and expect that to suffice. I should let it do the talking even if that talking isn't good enough.
Next time I make something like this I'll make sure the scope is tighter.