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Hey!

First off, really like the game! 

Your story is great and well written! I like the characters that come by. They all have different personalities from the dialogue, and you can tell them apart from that alone in some cases. (Well done!)

I have played each version and its always fun to come back and see what's new, i wish you could skip days though.

 Day 19, although a really creative concept, I found to be a *little* annoying to play. (not sure how i was supposed to figure out the books? Without random clicking? Maybe im just dum.)

Skipping days isnt a perfect soloution, but for days that dont have key plot events maybe (browser might benefit from this feature).

The reason I wanted to write a comment though, was to ask if you plan to make a "good ending". (I get this is a nsfw game but...) I couldnt help but feel really bad for some of the characters lmao

*SPOILERS*

The new miniboss is probably doomed to probably never walk again and the theif is... probably out of the story for good? (Which is a shame as the theif was my favourite character). I know they were antagonists but it still feels bad  😅 (but not in a "game bad" way)

I know its silly but i kinda wish there was a way to not be so evil LOL 

Just giving my two cents (and probably 3 bucks when this comes out, if itch allows it..). I think it could be fun to have multiple endings, idk helping the town or the dungeon.

Anyways though.. Great game! Amazing concept that I like, i know making games is already hard work, plus you already have a plan I'm sure. 

Hope all goes well :D

Thank you so much! I live for responses like this!

Day 19 has had mixed reviews, but did you combine the scry eye with the grabber?

Glad you like the writing; I’ve put a lot of juice into it, and they’ve been fun to write out. Nice thing about so many characters: I can have a wide array of personalities and little stories to tell.

SPOILERS

I know what you mean about good endings vs bad endings XD Unfortunately, I currently plan for the game to be linear, to keep the scope something I can complete; branching paths get crazy time consuming. But I value the feedback! And I Don’t want to spoil anythign in the future.

Hi!

Yeah I did combine the eye with the grabber, but it wasn't entirely obvious (had to check the comments lmao), maybe adding a subtle glow would help, kinda like the eye of ender from minecraft maybe (or the dis-enchanting effect on the amulet).

My bigger issue was the books, i had no idea they were important until i accidentally clicked them and they got added to the shelf. (I might have missed something though?). Gameplay wise though, it is very creative I think it just needs a bit more visual explanation.

I completely understand why you don't plan to create branching paths (The extra work would be insane!), I just wanted to at least ask that we might have a way to stop someone rotting in a dungeon for eternity XD. I say this because i got more invested in the gameplay/story than the other aspect (which is a good thing) 

I will not inquire though for the sake of spoilers!

You have a great game here and can't wait to see more from you! 

I’ve recently modified the scrying eye so it looks around, hopefully grabbing more peoples’ attention.

I will think about the books!

It is a massive compliment to me that you’re so invested in the characters. Certainly not too many nsfw games can say that! It has been a surprisingly good excuse to make little story arcs.

Current plan is, Pinkie’s story ends here, outside of maybe a written epilogue at the end. The goblin, however; you’ve not seen the last of her : )

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Aw sad i liked her dynamic, no more theft to worry about though :D.

It's not very intuitive, but I think adding a label to the book is maybe the easiest option? you could make a joke even: "if your reading this, you will need this book!" (Joking about the fact you need to be 2 feet tall to read it, and it contains the solution) idk stupid idea, but a label of some description might work.

I haven't seen the eye effect you added yet, but im sure it will do the job!

Since you mentioned an epilogue, i can't help but think adding a wheatley-esc quote would be funny where pinkie apologises in hopes it somehow reverses her mistake . (Portal 2 has an ending scene where wheatley apologises for his stupid actions during the game). Just an idea but I think it's funny

Not sure what your situation is, but this is really neat, maybe in the future a non- nsfw game could be a thing?

That’s not a bad idea! I’ve added a title to the book to at least indicate to people that it isn’t a generic book baked into the background.

Oh, Pinkie isn’t apologizing for anything XD But I hope you find any epilogue I make fun regardless.

Good news, my financial stability doesn’t hinge on the monetization of this game. Payments and donations are really cool and motivating, but the game will get done regardless.

Not sure what the future holds, game-wise, after OPP.