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So I put your game into an indie romp I made. Your game starts at 8:46

I feel the effect would have been better if you'd paced out the visuals more instead of using the same 3 spooky parts over and over. 

in regards to the diary, even including a button to read the diary (whether it is the players only option or not) adds some immersion rather than just having it auto read. The character over all was good and unsettling however when they speak as if you've smacked your face into the keyboard it just comes off as silly. 


I do hope i'm not coming off as harsh since it's not my intention. I want to see how far you get making these games :)