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Firstly, the illustrations in this are great; I wish there were more of those to admire. Everything is presented in a precise, straightforward manner. However, I feel like more time should have been spent on each of the individual islands. The prose is very tasteful, but from a playability perspective, it would be nice to have some additional details like suggested denizens, light levels, sense of size, etc. The consequences of the final puzzle are meaningful, but I feel like the wording of the description makes it harder to run on short notice. Overall, the adventure has a unique, ethereal feel that suits your assigned title well. 

Thanks a lot. Your illustration is realy good too. I have more text to describe the place and the spiritis, but need to cut down to fit in the page. In thinking on make a long version, with more things on it.